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by tinytonyw

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Whaaaaaaaat!

I know this is a sex forum but puh-leeze! get yourself a grammar book and get a clue about how to write and spell

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Needs work

You need an editor badly. Not just the grammar but mixing up the names as well. Keep working on it though.

63lsmith63lsmithalmost 7 years ago
NICE

yes a few mistakes but over all a good hot story. Hope you do an other chapter with these two.

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