All Comments on 'Too Clever by a Mile Ch. 05'

This story becomes more stupid as it unfolds. S&M is not appreciated

This is still odd. I read your defense after the last one but the first two pages of this one were no better - worse if anything. It it hat been classified under Fetish it would have been more accurate. One more chance from me based on your past stuff that I thought was good

Still written well but I would break every bone in the hand he hit me with.

Steve is a piece of shit.

The author is quite right. If she went out on the open road dressed like that there would indeed be a load of shit flying about and it would all be aimed at Steve.

1 star and thats too many

This a pretty fucked up romance, I think you missed the mark for this category. KS

Just when I thought that Steve couldn’t be a bigger asshole, you proved me wrong.