All Comments on 'Too Good to be True Pt. 01'

by kimberau

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice tease

Looking forward to how this develops already.

HamsterHamsterabout 6 years ago
Anti Climax

This was too short and did not complete the set-up. We needed to get the couple together again to talk about all their experiences and conjecture about what may be next.

LupusDeiLupusDeiabout 6 years ago
Almost familiar stuff

And, there are no clothes after this point, until they go home; scripted scenes they required to play act are hardcore sex, first as couples, then with strangers. Have played variations of that story out in my mind dozens of times. May still read your take on it, maybe, just maybe I still can get surprised. And what matters in art for real is the 'how' not so much the 'what' after all.

WatcherRobWatcherRobabout 6 years ago
I expected more

The title says it all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I read to the point where the pubic hair left and I did also.

zooliciouszooliciousabout 6 years ago
Nice setp

I'm sure we'll get plenty more backstory as they progress through the many upcoming surprises. It pays to read the fine print in all legal documents. In this case, it pays not to read it.

vsloverbicdvsloverbicdabout 6 years ago

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter(s)...

tazz317tazz317about 6 years ago
THIS REMINDS ME OF A PORN HAUNTED FUN HOUSE

especially on the water slide, TK U MLJ LV NV

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