All Comments on 'Too Late My Awakening'

more cuck shit.

Swift by name but not by nature.

As this writer insults the readers that don't like his stories, no comments, just 1*

Dont waste your time. Its the same old cuck shit.

Annony, the ass hole of LIT reads all of these LW stories and then jerks off bitching about them. Ever since his wife left him after fucking the fleet he's pissed off.

Talking about yourself again "needyou200"? Give it a rest, or at least change your message. It's getting stale and boring. 1*

Enough said. Why waste words.

Although a little long for a single submission, I enjoyed reading it very much. Only suggestion I have is get a proof read before submission. Several "errors" that probably could/would have been corrected easily.

Wow Pete, you sure have collected some anonymous haters! Oh well piss on them! I liked your story five stars worth. Thanks for it, and all your stories. Semper Fi.

A good story pretty well told, although the style comes off a little clinical.

I loved the story. Kim may have been alluding to her daughter as the right one..... Hmmm story idea?. About the haters... Why even take anon comments??

You Nailed It !!!

And to prove it, you get 5*s

Keep them cuming

I enjoyed reading the story. I could have done without the condescending comments. They added nothing and were a bit distracting from a pretty well developed storyline. Thank you for the writing. It was very good.

Same to you fellow. Piss on you. Hope you choke on it.

I enjoyed your story, ignore the naysayers, they know not what they do, I stopped writing so in a sense, they won, but life is too short to be distracted. Keep going, you are a good story teller.

anonymous is that they are afraid a sicko like ironman2 will get their address. The story was pretty good even if it's not my thing.

Its not a cuck tale. Definitely not cheating but certainly hot, respectful and maybe a bit preachy. The "tips to readers" was pretty good. Gave it a sense of purpose even if it was a bit funny. I can envisage a girl being taken into Swift's sex toy booby trapped lair and everytime that she reaches for an object or opens a drawer or cabinet a new devise springs forth. She goes to hang up her jacket and out pops Otto Pilot. Giggity-Giggity. Its what Chrissy and Janet would have discovered if Larry had managed to take them home after a night of drinking at the Regal Beagle.

It was a damn good read. 5*

I'm not sure what is wrong with the negative assholes. This as most of your stories should be used as a marital TRAINING MANUAL !

Please ignore their BS and write until your fingers fall off. My wife finally started to come around at "Girl Talk" and I started sharing her after PowToon and let me tell you, at 43 it is one hot weekend after another! ***** Five stars cause it wouldn't accept 10.

They have her accepting at the bar and he leaves to the room. She will know she was set up, a sure turn off and probable game changer normally.

Then, he sticks his face in her and she shutters rather than shudders.

Then, instead of fucking her he has her use her orgasms on anal? Ygbsm.

Pretty well finished it for me right there.

I never heard Peter tell him she was multiorgasmic.

cuck shit.

I love the love of this story! I also don't understand all the negativity! It is story - fictional after all. Get a life!

This for sure needs another chapter

Please !!!

And better proofreading. Using spell check is not enough. Champaign is a city, champagne is a beverage. Explanation when you really meant exclamation, shutter instead of shudder, etc. Very distracting. Still gave you five stars for the story, though.

another cocksucking WIMP posting DUMB cuck SHIT.

You arrogant bum. I guess you'd like a guy to shove his shit streaked cock in your mouth.

I hope this author hasn't stopped posting.

Aside from some folks NOT understanding some of the erotic details, I found this story to be a good read. It encompasses the laundry list that I rate stories by. Character development, affection, mystery, sexual interaction and a real life ending where hope may be found.

A good story but we then have the usual porn industry tick list getting clicked off, esp their standard bit these days that any posh, elegant lady just needs a bit of persuading and she'll do anal AND lick the shit off the cock afterwards. Maybe these authors would like to try doing that?

Me, I'm always suspicious of those that chase pussy but want anal.

This was a great story, well written with emotion and erotica. Loved it thanks

Idk how this rated so high, the author's notes in several places mid-story were annoying and condescending, like he is teaching us all important matters. The sex scenes were way too long. No drama at all, no conflict, so no tension nor was any resolved.

Wonderful!

I loved it and intend to read all your stories thank you for a great erotic read.