All Comments on 'Too Tempting'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ending

Really wanted them to fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Can't wait for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good build up...

... and then a roller coaster drop of an ending. Finish a story, even a chapter, don't cut it off.

Acup

kissmecannibalkissmecannibalover 9 years ago
Fantastic

Amazing! Please make a second part :D

InnocentMissLittleInnocentMissLittleover 8 years ago

Please please do a follow up, this was amazing and I would love to know were this ends up <3

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