by cutebabysadie
Stay the course Todd, Samantha is really in to this. I really like her encouraging you. Just a tip I didn't slurp my cum I just flicked and wiggled her clit to another O.
You got the five stars as I said you would get. It's just that I didn't see the other half till I tried to see what else you have written. this was a very good story. I am waiting for you to give the readers the " more to cum " part don't make us wait too long though. Please.
It's one thing to find out you really enjoy the same gender. It's another thing to figure out that you get off on being submissive. I love Todd and how quickly he found out both.
I love how you started this story, and I love where you took it in this chapter. I'll be back for the next chapter.
So far, so good, can't wait to read the next installment. The submission and transgretion of the Alpha into a submissive is dead on! Keep up the great work!
Why are some small, wimpy looking guys sometimes so fucking commanding and dominant? I resent little guys like Mark but can't deny something about Todd's degradation turned me on like crazy. Being a big guy I can't explain it but small guys like Mark does something to me. Need more of this!
I love the dynamic. The problem when a character surrenders this quickly though is there really isn't really anywhere else you can take it. He's already completely surrendered any free will.