All Comments on 'Total Power Exchange'

Please make an audio recording of this; honestly, i would love to listen to this every night before bed. I desire giving up my control to someone whom wants it more.

what a great way to tell this story, and the vocabulary, you're repeating. i am a big fan of yours :)

Wonderful!

I like the second person style. I use it a lot in my own writing. It would be interesting to see you expand on this and turn it into more of a scene and story.