All Comments on 'Touch Ch. 04'

Great writing. :) Sure, some spelling errors, but nothing to get worked up about. This is turning pretty epic. I love the complexity of the characters, and the intrusion of the outside world (which continues to roll on, despite these characters' being trapped in a bubble of their own).

This has got to be one of the most incredibly erotic stories I have read in a very long time. Surprisingly though, as erotic as it is, I find myself just as interested in the development of the characters and anxiously await the further introduction of certain characters and the delimma's that could develop with that introduction, not to mention what the future holds for Kerry and Jay.