All Comments on 'Touch of Heart'

Emotional, Loved the female characters....

Sorry, but I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. Being excited about your first submission is no reason to allow so many awful mistakes. There are many very good editors in Literotica. Make sure that you use one for your next story.

Sorry english is not my first language....

Waited editors for 1 month, so decided to just correct the grammar and post it...

Well every one has their likes and dislikes, cant complain :)

So fine by me :)

Well you like or dislike sequel is on its way....

I am sure first page is very boring, So you have to bear with it, Sorry cant help much in the first page....

Good story but plz find a editor that can help would make it better and easier to read

If you can't find an editor, try reading stories written in English, It might help .