All Comments on 'Touched by Moonlight Ch. 01'

Happy to see the continuation of the touched saga.I feel for Katrina.Looking forward to where you take us on this adventure.I enjoy your writing and knew there was more to come.

Loved it

Loved it

Loved it

Sooooo happy you 're back, can't wait for this story

I just read KBM over the past few days and this too. I really love your work, and it gives me a deep sense of empathy towards the characters unlike any other author on this website, and i've read a few. All in all i was happy with KBM, but wasnt happy with the ending. This isn't to say i disliked it, but it is in a state of limbo, you could continue with stefani or not. I really like this your writing and its inspired me to write myself, so I may start with something similar to this genre. Also, i noticed that throughout the various editors you've had, they cannot correct something, which, although so trivial i find to be irksome:

Your: it is your item

You're: i can see you're (you are) there

It had to come out :3

Anyway i wish to see you continue your writing on this site, it is defenitely of quality, and i enjoy that the story has moved on.

P.S Can rain not hold so much chagrin and grief, its already sad enough, and in the oblivion KBM has been left in, i feel it unnecessary to mention him as the story has moved on D:

P.S.S Do you check previous stories for comments, or do you get notified of comments regardless the chapter?

Sorry, didn't score it, it was just dull, seemed like there was a lot of repetitiveness in the paragraphs, different words meaning the same thing.

I loved your last story but if the ending of this one turns out to be the same end I will not be able to take it. Not every story needs an unhappy ending but at least tag it as such so people aren't hurt by it.

Please tell me where to find Kissed By Lightning I have been looking for it for like 2 years & can't find it.