by thisgirlistrouble
I loved this work...great writing, emotion and detail. I felt I was watching and loved it. Very erotic and sensual. Thank you this wonderful vision.
It was almost as good as doing it myself. Just to taste you would have been heaven. Keep writing please.
This is my new girl-play bible. Really great detail, well written, loved how you included your fantasies during the act. I even like how you said the blankets were just over your feet. I can picture you squirming in pleasure. It takes a lot to hold my interest and this did it. I hope you write another story like this.
I think it it is the details that make it so good, the descriptions of breath and cold on your skin. Thanks for writing.
So sensual. You have me so hard. Even my tongue is hard...