All Comments on 'Tracey and Damien'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
|Wow|

Really good story, had me cumming too!! x

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Hot

Hope sister becomes more in control in Part 2....and really takes more control.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
DETAILS = AWESOME

Very detailed got me into the story as if I was right there good job. =D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
honest opinion not a kiss ass one

this story was not real good way to unrealistic. you say the sister didn't know her way around the woods so if he didn't like the way she acted and treated him like you say then it seems all he had to do was get up in the morning pack some food and take off into the woods and not come back until dark then lock himself in his room keep it atleast somewhat believable please

DBRS

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
REAL DUMB

if he didn't like the way his sister bossed him around WHY WAS HE GOING IN THE FIRST PLACE. just plain stupid needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER

liqueurliqueurover 11 years ago
I couldn't disagree more with the last comment. . .

I think the story was delightfully subtle, well-written, and very sexy. More, please?

jane marwoodjane marwoodover 11 years ago
Lovely 5*****

Loved it and am looking forward to more of your work.

LeonariLeonariover 11 years ago
Nice

Better if they would actually cross the line though.

lol at that annonymus comment... seriously?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
yet another

twilight zone episode that never should have been posted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I really wish i had a sister just like her..

dark1973knightdark1973knightover 6 years ago

Love the story, but to bad it ended like that.

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