by MDesign
Hope sister becomes more in control in Part 2....and really takes more control.
Very detailed got me into the story as if I was right there good job. =D
this story was not real good way to unrealistic. you say the sister didn't know her way around the woods so if he didn't like the way she acted and treated him like you say then it seems all he had to do was get up in the morning pack some food and take off into the woods and not come back until dark then lock himself in his room keep it atleast somewhat believable please
DBRS
if he didn't like the way his sister bossed him around WHY WAS HE GOING IN THE FIRST PLACE. just plain stupid needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER
I think the story was delightfully subtle, well-written, and very sexy. More, please?
Better if they would actually cross the line though.
lol at that annonymus comment... seriously?