by JustLikeEwe
I have been through many stories on this site recently. Know that this is a well written story with all the trimmings. We have a young & lovely damsel in distress, a "Taxi", "Dudley Dooright" hero guy. We have low life sleaze and debauchery. We have sex, love and a happy ending. I loved it. It is not too short yet not too long. I might have liked a little more sex detail but nevertheless it was just great for me.
I was expecting just another black guy white girl story and was pleasantly surprised when there was a lot more to it. Deacon's method's might have been a bit risky for the ex-cop but it provided a sense of closure for the girl and added to the good vibrations of the ending. Super story!
I wasn't going to read it at first thinking that it was going to be like most of the other BM/WF stories. I am glad I took a chance and read it, it was a very good story. Keep up the good work.
i liked it , surprised also, it was really good and tender
made me feel good
and despite the age difference , or actually because of it, another story on these two might be good
I really enjoyed the connection the characters had with each other. Made me feel good reading this story. Thanks for writing it. :)
This was a very powerful read and was both sweet and sensuous. Thanks.
I'm not usually a fan of the romantic stuff, but this was really good. The unshaven bit was a nice bonus. Thank you for the good work!
Fuck the sex— this was a great story without the sex! Well written!!
Was a good read. Not nearly as well described in the sex department as it could have been, but a good read just the same. Take your time. Don't be afraid to flesh the story line out a bit more. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading.
Wow! Super short story. This is the kind of good writing we used to get in the men's magazines. Thank you!