by JustLikeEwe
Wow! Super short story. This is the kind of good writing we used to get in the men's magazines. Thank you!
Was a good read. Not nearly as well described in the sex department as it could have been, but a good read just the same. Take your time. Don't be afraid to flesh the story line out a bit more. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading.
Fuck the sex— this was a great story without the sex! Well written!!
I'm not usually a fan of the romantic stuff, but this was really good. The unshaven bit was a nice bonus. Thank you for the good work!
This was a very powerful read and was both sweet and sensuous. Thanks.
I really enjoyed the connection the characters had with each other. Made me feel good reading this story. Thanks for writing it. :)
and despite the age difference , or actually because of it, another story on these two might be good
i liked it , surprised also, it was really good and tender
made me feel good
I wasn't going to read it at first thinking that it was going to be like most of the other BM/WF stories. I am glad I took a chance and read it, it was a very good story. Keep up the good work.
I was expecting just another black guy white girl story and was pleasantly surprised when there was a lot more to it. Deacon's method's might have been a bit risky for the ex-cop but it provided a sense of closure for the girl and added to the good vibrations of the ending. Super story!
I have been through many stories on this site recently. Know that this is a well written story with all the trimmings. We have a young & lovely damsel in distress, a "Taxi", "Dudley Dooright" hero guy. We have low life sleaze and debauchery. We have sex, love and a happy ending. I loved it. It is not too short yet not too long. I might have liked a little more sex detail but nevertheless it was just great for me.