Trading Spaces

It would have been nice for them to stay in each other's bodies at least until the son ( mother) gives birth that would have been nice but tough to fill everything in between the sex and birth like work etc. Interesting though not normally into incest but interestingly entertaining.

Thanks for writing a story. An idea may be to have involved Wanda more since she was introduced as the main character. Also, she could have switched with the mother to have a very different adventure.

The one problem i found at the beginning of this story where they wake up in the others body is that it is not the minds that have switched but the body's. As they wake up in their own room son in his room with his mothers body, Mother in her room with sons body. Surely the son should wake up in his mothers bed with her body.

my preference would include her wearing satin night dress and admire her fine underwear before they meet each other.

Your story was quite different. I loved it to a point where I wish switching like that was possible. I did find that Wanda, a main character, that started it all, had hardly any mention. A bit at the start and towards the end. One would have thought that when was on the way to their house that she would have found Daphne and Norris in the throes of love making. The story does leave me wondering, where's the rest. It needs more. What happened when Wanda found out that as a result of her switching them they're now lovers? Does she join in and they enjoy a threesome and did Daphne end up impregnating her own body and then Norris making sure she gets pregnant?

Yeah, the premise is good. But describing who is in who's head or who's head is in who's body was more complicated than it had to be. That they gave in to their passions pretty quick in their sexual confusion is believable. His hormones are raging and she hadn't gotten laid in three years. Both feeling the wonderful sensations of the opposite sex's body for the first time. But Wanda the Witch plays such an abbreviated role. As important as she is to their interchanging, she does not discover them 'en flagrante delicto', which takes away some of the drama that I expected to see. And what did it get Wanda? Not the return of the trip to the cabin, for sure. In fact, he may never want Wanda again. And if Mother becomes 'with child' as a result, Wanda is going to be pissed. But at whom? And why do you refer to them and their body parts and fluids as evil and dirty etc.? I have some problems with how a really good story is getting told.