by Shay73
Very well written. Awesome story. Very believable. Where's chapter 2? You can't just leave us hanging.
Enjoyed reading the story. I to am often "mouthy" when I've been on my own a bit long...so I related well. Very well written, moved along...overall a great read!
Taz
Thank you to write so well. I could totally imagine it all.. just i hated the cliff hanger, i was all dreaming here, and then Bang. It finished haha.