All Comments on 'Training Ch. 07'

love how you build it and hen made this young guy cum!

I just love when a cunt just can not get enough cock in her, more and more please

This is a really erotic storyline. I don't know about any misspellings or wrong words, because I was into the story so much that all I read was pure lust.

A really hot and erotic story that was so good to read.

Thanks for the read.

Great story and waiting for more. If someone is worried about spelling and punctuation maybe they should look elsewhere or get more of a life rather then complain about the little things. I just love the story line and the writing style of this author.

What the hell are you looking for --grammatical excellence or good porn?

If it's the former, look elsewhere pal. If you appreciate the latter you've found the right author.

Bonnie,

I really like your stories, nice.

I enjoyed cumming to them.

Steve

wow bonnie you just keep getting better love,you have an amazing and erotic imagination xx

I guess I am lucky I can't spell worth a dern because it is very seldem something like a miss spelled word interrupts my enjoyment of a story

For that matter, it cannot write too well. Just mindless arrogant perversion. 1*!

E I G H T E R for the word either. You really are a little bitch who needs and wants ass fucking!! Bonnie!!!

You REALLY need one.

For anyone who cares, this is not an English lit paper. This is an erotic incestuous love story between mother, son and her friend. Luckily, the son had a mature woman ( his mother's friend) to teach him how to fully pleasure a woman and the benefits he would receive in return. The main characters are emotionally and psychologically mature enough, possess enough self-confidence and sense of self that theycan accept the fact that love has no limits nor boundaries. There is no guilt, shame, self-recrimination, self-doubt nor self-loathing. There is only recognition that the characters love and respect each other and want to sexually please the other more than themselves.