All Comments on 'Training Rebecca Ch. 11'

Is either a idiot or a wimp or both. You need to end it with him either way. Other than that idiot sluts don't turn me on much.

Sure it's hot, but lets face it, by revealing her as a submissive, you've ruined her crediblity and her job. With that, you lose leverage. The receptionist will blab to everyone what she saw and within hours, the whole company will know what is going on and some ambitious executive will use that against her.

As a result, you lose power. The truth will come out and while she may go to prison, so will everyone who was BLACKMAILING her. Everyone loses.

As for the husband, why is he there? He doesn't say anything, he doesn't do anything, he follows her one night and...what? Rescues her? Questions her? No, he leaves her...and he supposed to be in love with her? Come on, give him some balls or take him out of the story but one way or another, the mayor of loserville needs to disappear.

If you are a sub to someone besides your spouse and you deside that being a sub is more important than the one you stood up in church and made your vows to, it is pass time for a divorce. This applies to any sub not maried to the Dom/Domme. If you word is worthless I can't see how the Dom/Domme could believe it either.

this has got to be one of the hottest, most humiliating stories of all time...right up there with Owned Teacher, in this gyrl's opinion.

Very hot and totaly unbelievable of course. I would like Maria to be shown her place. (kicking and screaming of course :))

Ok, I have liked it but it is starting to lose continuity if all it is going to be just some way to become more absurd then keep it up. You had something working and I wish you would find it. Something like John decides he wants his wife all to himself and turns Maria into a plaything for the boys.

I agree Maria needs to be put in her place.

John is the reason she is in this position, why would you have her anything but beating his ass making him her sissy boy I dont know .

Seriiously. maria is a cunt. i despise that charachter. The huusband should end up getting fucked up somehow as well.

I really enjoy the whole Dom/Sub thing with Kyle and Rebecca, but the parts with Maria are not to enjoyable. I understand the need to have her in the story, but her scenes seem to go a bit beyond the Dom/Sub role. Humiliation is also fine, but you are writing Maria being just downright cruel. It's not very enjoyable.

Too much Maria

I just don't like the appearance of Maria as her mistress,Kyle is fine but Maria takes it a little too far especially the Ms. Davis experience at the office.The training so far has been wonderful.Maria has to learn her place at the hands of Kyle.