All Comments on 'Training Victoria'

Has potential, but once the sex began it -- in my opinion, at least -- got to the blowjob too fast. And then it just ended.

hello sir

this chapter was a bit quick at the end but

it runs so close to my deepest fantasy, that I can't wait for more !!

les_carrie@yahoo.com

Thank you for the comments! I agree, this story could have been better. It was actually a difficult story to write for me because the time line was fairly long and I wasn’t sure how much back story to include. I had considered not publishing it, but in the end thought, what the hell, no one will probably read it anyway. I very much appreciate the feedback. It will help me write better in the future.

i enjoyed Training Victoria very much. thank you for sharing it with us

It starts well, It promises a lot and delivers very general scenes and little development. It could use a lot of details.