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- COMMENTS
satinlvr_mwfover 3 years agoI stumbled across your writing, and am enjoying the pace and style. You have a creative storyline going, something new and different. Please don't stop writing!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoDon't get me wrong I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes as it's been excellent so far, well paced and not plagued with a bunch of misspellings and/or poor grammar. ( The types of errors that tend to yank the imagination out of a story.)
What a story it's been too, however one gets only so far with the sexy bits, as sexy as those bits have been..!
Throwing a bit a curveball here as a cliffhanger/hook is just brilliant.
Well done Chromex.
hindsight2020over 8 years agoUnless she got an iPhone. No real tech geek who does not work for Apple would find it attractive with all the abilities available in Android.
maxd01almost 10 years agoI died at the ending and definitely has me curious. I am enjoying this story but I would have to suggest an editor. I have noticed a number of ? when you should have used a . instead. Also minor spelling issue such as 'I got my' instead of 'I got me'.
