All Comments on 'Transformation Ch. 05'

So far I have been reading this story without actually skipping a line as I usually do. Having lived in the Phoenix area some of the places bring back memories.What is scaring me I know someone named Heather that could probably pass for the ex. I have come across a couple of places where it seemed a word was missing or something similar. But overall this is one of the better stories I have read. I especially like the cliffhangers at the end. Reminds me of the last show of the season of a show where they want you to come back.

You have a great vivid imagination and I've just cum after that fuck fest and then you leave another spoiler for Chapter 6 compelling reading

Thanks for breath of fresh air!!!. And thanks for sharing.

I do fully intend to continue the story. Chapter 6 is written and chapter 7 is in progress. I am waiting to hear back from the editor I messaged as I would like to clean up the grammar and structure. I do greatly appreciate the positive feedback I have received and it certainly encourages my to continue.

. Now I gotta go get me a Big Juan at the Chuck-box.

Seriously chromex - you HAVE to keep writing this series !!! Everyone who had read the series so far have enjoyed it immensely - you cannot just leave us hanging like this !! Love it and want more !!

Definitely enjoying the story, much awesome. Can't wait for the continuation.

Heather needs to be changed as a lesson, please wright it I know you can

Paul.................

i know this is not the last chapter heather has a big surprise coming

Thanks for the comments.

I knew when I wrote the final paragraph it was the most likely to draw a reaction and unfortunately I do love cliffhangers. I always want to be there when someone reads it for the first time just to get the look on their face.

I am also planning to look into an editor as you deserve the best written story I can provide.

Great Story . I hate cliff hangers. I love how the story is going and I love the twist. The X-Girlfriend was unexpected but that just made more hungrier for the next chapter.

I'm just going to say WTF! and wait, great job

Evil cliffhanger is evil. Great story so far, I hope it continues. The whole 'alien prison' thing is weird, but I've read weirder. It might be worth getting an editor, because there are quite a few grammatical errors or sentences that don't make sense. Good work. Keep it up.