All Comments on 'Transformations - Witnesses Ch. 13'

More please

A truly excellent story, thank you for writing and sharing it!

This series has been consistently great throughout every chapter. I read this final chapter the day it came out, and I still can't stop thinking about it. I really hope you do another series similar to this, or possibly even a continuation of this reality/story line with different characters. Whatever your next project will be, I'm highly anticipating it.

We're definitely writing more. We're putting the final touches on Transformations: Soccer Mom and it should be released soon!

Triskelion = Star Trek TOS... :)

Great story. I will read more but I would like to suggest "one-shots" of these characters; you know, little vignettes. Very much appreciated what you wrote about same-sex love.

I loved the ending with Jessica ending up with Cal, her husband! It was a really cool touch, because Cal had gone to Cuba as a missionary and had never come back.

It's mad but so good it's unbelievable. Just like the characters, they're almost likeable. Well done. 5 stars throughout.

My personal opinion is that there is to much left unexplained especially about the professional crafte, the other guy knew where he was going and what he was going to do yet David did not. I blame the bitch Gwen. Anyway very nice to see Jessica ended up with her husband, someone who still cares for her unlike bitch Gwen. I hope i see more of sugar tits and Gwen like fades into the background, after her transformation i just hate her character. I mean i even like the demon dominatrix more and i dislike dominant women lmao.