All Comments on 'Trapped In Your Time'

total waste of time given the title. why not just leave off the time travel thing and say she fucks or sucks her dads dick and be done with it.

The story itself was decent, I like the points you were trying to make...it just feels incomplete because of the set up and the concept not really being explored...like how does she get to the past, and why?

Nice idea of what the future might be like (don't know about the dirt streets, though). The freedom to be oneself, and choose to partner with anyone who agrees, and no relationship hangups, sounds like heaven. Hope the population reduction came by choice, though, not by force.

SHIT,SHIT,SHIT

... so keep going. Please!