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Anonymousalmost 7 years agoNeeds a good editor.
Intriguing story idea, but too many shirts in the narrative. You go from first person to third person and back again.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agore: anonymous-5 HEY ANNONY
Neither do you. Not only are your comments stupid but you can't spell worth a damn. Give it a rest Bonnie. Don't you get tired of the shit you spew every day?
Anonymousalmost 2 years ago"I just finished getting the kids to the table for dinner when they trounced down stairs."
Trounced - to thrash or punish severely
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