All Comments on 'Trip to the Movies Ch. 03'

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nineironnineironover 20 years ago

great story! one word for ypur next installment...UROLOGY!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
MUST HAVE MORE!

MUST HAVE MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
more

more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
MORE,MORE, MORE!!!!

Please continue this series.... PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
do more

Do more.

bratcat786bratcat786over 18 years ago
more

I know it's been awhile since this was written but I really enjoyed it and would love to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

wowwwwwwwwwwwww was a good story only thing wrong was u didn't go on with ch 4 to tell us what they did till mom & dad got home so ch 4 i wait for yummy yummy.

ElvenTempestarii621ElvenTempestarii621about 11 years ago

An overall good story but various spelling errors and the way you shifter perspective in the third story was annoying.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More idiocy..

Yet more badly-spelled 'by-the-numbers' sex, with no hint of experience; just how old are you? There's nothing new, nothing original, and nothing hot about this drab little story, just more juvenile wank-fantasy, written by a pre-pubescent loner. Go away.

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