All Comments on 'Tropes Ch. 01'

by UghOkay

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Oh my god this is brilliant. This needs to be required reading for all new authors on this site to stay away from the same tired (and sometimes gross/offensive) tropes. Excellent work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Thanks for prince snow and now this excellent

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Cute

I hope you continue it...

fuzzyNOLAfuzzyNOLAabout 7 years ago
thank you

this was hysterical. i needed something to laugh at. hope this does continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very Creative

Good job - enjoyed it

tarzanacidetarzanacideabout 7 years ago
So true

As an author on here I just have to clap for this.

daddysgrl434daddysgrl434about 7 years ago
Awesome job

Keep going! I can't wait to see whats next

smoothboismoothboiabout 7 years ago

I'd love to find out I was a Literotica character!

UghOkayUghOkayabout 7 years agoAuthor
If you want to know who I imagined in each role when I wrote this:

Harry Shum Jr. as Brad

Rob Scott Wilson as Drake

Jensen Ackles as Coach Grant

Rome Flynn as Tyrone

Brandon Mychal Smith as Kevin

Lucy Hale as Amber

Jillian Bell as Pam

Myself as The Author/UghOkay/Alan

Characters who will show up next chapter:

Henry Cavill as Michael

Mishael Morgan as Sasha

Thanks for all the positive feedback. It means a lot to me.

UghOkayUghOkayabout 7 years agoAuthor
Oops. Forget to mention who I imagined as Nate and Chad

Grant Gustin as Nate

Alexander Ludwig as Chad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hilarious... and so true

Man, you nailed it! Nearly every bad Literotica cliche skewered. Nice work!

sirhugssirhugsabout 7 years ago
What are these Non-sex characters of which you speak?

in my neighbourhood of Literotica, all characters over 18 MUST join in. It is a rule.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This wass the most hilarious thing I've ever read on here! Fucking hysterical poking fun at literotica. keep it up!

UghOkayUghOkayabout 7 years agoAuthor
To the person who sent anonymous feedback complaining:

I know buttholes aren't magically clean. That line was poking fun at Literotica characters never having to douche or skip meals to prepare for anal. *bangs head against desk* Jesus take the wheel...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
New and fun twist

Thanks for taking a totally new direction, well written and fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Bang the author

Best story I've read on literaotcia. Witty and hot. Hope he gets to nail the author after he hacks the story and gives himself a backstory and a 10 inch boner. Bring it on.

UK_DreamerUK_Dreamerover 6 years ago
Excellent

I have just seen chapter 2 published and had a quick skip read which made me read this chapter. Funny and well written, going back to read chapter 2 properly now.

Keep up the good work.

UKD

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Absolutely beautiful satire! Just like Brad, you've stepped out of the boxes most writers here don't even know they're trapped in. I can't wait to see what else you write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

IM FUCKING DECEASED πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ this is amazing omggggg

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

VAGUELY RESEMBLE THE PROPERTY BROTHERS AAAAAHHHH πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
so clever!

This chapter is absolutely hilarious!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This is great, Iove it! Awesome concept and writing

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyabout 5 years ago
You've nailed it

Hilarious! But you've only just skimmed the surface of all the cliches in gay literotica. And I've always said, "If you can't laugh while having sex then you're doing it wrong!!"

curiousaudreycuriousaudreyalmost 3 years ago

Tyrone's thot sjhhsjkkss

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