by UghOkay
Hilarious! But you've only just skimmed the surface of all the cliches in gay literotica. And I've always said, "If you can't laugh while having sex then you're doing it wrong!!"
Absolutely beautiful satire! Just like Brad, you've stepped out of the boxes most writers here don't even know they're trapped in. I can't wait to see what else you write.
I have just seen chapter 2 published and had a quick skip read which made me read this chapter. Funny and well written, going back to read chapter 2 properly now.
Keep up the good work.
UKD
Best story I've read on literaotcia. Witty and hot. Hope he gets to nail the author after he hacks the story and gives himself a backstory and a 10 inch boner. Bring it on.
Thanks for taking a totally new direction, well written and fun to read.
I know buttholes aren't magically clean. That line was poking fun at Literotica characters never having to douche or skip meals to prepare for anal. *bangs head against desk* Jesus take the wheel...
This wass the most hilarious thing I've ever read on here! Fucking hysterical poking fun at literotica. keep it up!
in my neighbourhood of Literotica, all characters over 18 MUST join in. It is a rule.
Man, you nailed it! Nearly every bad Literotica cliche skewered. Nice work!
Grant Gustin as Nate
Alexander Ludwig as Chad
Harry Shum Jr. as Brad
Rob Scott Wilson as Drake
Jensen Ackles as Coach Grant
Rome Flynn as Tyrone
Brandon Mychal Smith as Kevin
Lucy Hale as Amber
Jillian Bell as Pam
Myself as The Author/UghOkay/Alan
Characters who will show up next chapter:
Henry Cavill as Michael
Mishael Morgan as Sasha
Thanks for all the positive feedback. It means a lot to me.
this was hysterical. i needed something to laugh at. hope this does continue.
Oh my god this is brilliant. This needs to be required reading for all new authors on this site to stay away from the same tired (and sometimes gross/offensive) tropes. Excellent work!