All Comments on 'Trucker Ch. 03: Lake Point'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Damn! Hot! I'm so ready to cum w

hile wearing my mini mini skirt and my breasts pointing upward in desire to be fucked!

KerryLynnJamesKerryLynnJamesabout 7 years ago

Surprisingly deviant, in a sweet way😍Not slutty, but earthy and realâ˜ș

SimonDoomSimonDoomabout 7 years ago

Sweet and very erotic. You are the master of the miniskirt exhibitionist/voyeur genre! You handle both of the characters really well, with just the right amount of naughtiness but not laying it on too thick. I remember reading your story The Accidental Exhibitionist a long time ago. Glad to see you are back at it.

kensimoorekensimooreabout 7 years ago
Terrific!

Excellent story telling, not too crazy and more or less believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

More!More! Can't wait for future chapters. Love this story.8197

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Really well done

Excellent writing - would love to read more. Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great work!

You did an amazing job with this story! The build up the pacing, everything! One piece of advi've though, never change! This style of writing is the best! I'm not saying don't branch out but keep the core elements the same. I really hope to see more of Hal and Cody! Keep it up!

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