by Murray
You did an amazing job with this story! The build up the pacing, everything! One piece of advi've though, never change! This style of writing is the best! I'm not saying don't branch out but keep the core elements the same. I really hope to see more of Hal and Cody! Keep it up!
Excellent story telling, not too crazy and more or less believable.
Sweet and very erotic. You are the master of the miniskirt exhibitionist/voyeur genre! You handle both of the characters really well, with just the right amount of naughtiness but not laying it on too thick. I remember reading your story The Accidental Exhibitionist a long time ago. Glad to see you are back at it.
Surprisingly deviant, in a sweet wayđNot slutty, but earthy and realâș
Damn! Hot! I'm so ready to cum w
hile wearing my mini mini skirt and my breasts pointing upward in desire to be fucked!