All Comments on 'True Power Ch. 01'

Well it's a start. I think it could be great but there's not enough to really criticize anything that would be helpful. I will say the description and the start is enough for me to watch out for the next continuation. Thanks for writing, thanks for the story, keep at it, I'm sure you'll wow your readers.

You got my attention but way to short. So only a 4 this time

I will put 2 chapters in each post from now