All Comments on 'Truth or Dare Upstairs'

by alanfrench1973

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Epiphany_Jones over 7 years ago

This reads like you wrote it for a group of underage kids, and just added ten years to everyone's original age.

People in their mid-twenties who've only been with two or three sexual partners? Or are still virgins at twenty-four? All the subtle references and behavior seems to make a lot more sense using that math. For that reason, or whichever, the story was "okay", but not great. It just fell rather flat.

LarryInSeattle over 7 years ago

Yep!

Very childish!

Anonymousover 7 years ago

horrible

too fast, no character development...and i know its literotica the place of fantasy but who plays truth or dare and rushes to take dares right away....i didnt

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