All Comments on 'Truth or Fantasy? Ch. 04'

by phubby

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swingerjoeswingerjoealmost 10 years ago
Dragging it out

I keep reading each chapter because I'm interested in the storyline of the frustrated, sex-starved husband, and I'm curious to see how this is resolved. But this story is really dragging out.

Chapter Two was a carbon copy of Chaptet One. Both were about hubby sharing nude photos of wifey while she slept. And now, Chapter Four is pretty much a copy of Chapter Three. Both stories were about hubby fantasizing about fucking in public with his neighbors watching.

If this story is leading somewhere, then it's time to start moving it forward. If it is just a series of fantasies by hubby, I'm bailing (unless the fantasies become far more interesting.)

impo_58impo_58almost 10 years ago
Thanks...

Thanks for these stories being brief....You could make them even brifer...

Concritic123Concritic123almost 10 years ago
I don't know what this is....

Where are you going with this?

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Neither

It's not truth or fantasy. It's bullshit.

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