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All Comments on 'Tub Time to Remember'

by cockstar666

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Your method of dialog was distracting, but still was a nice, quick story.

Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
Lazy: how do I write dialogue?

Reader: by using quotation marks.

Didn't read past the part where

She: tells him not to talk and

You: keep using this convention

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