All Comments on 'Tuesday Golf'

Fucking a sand nigger is totally politically incorrect! Otherwise your story would be a total piece of shit. Please - eat shit and die! LOL!

as being a ped0 - that shit is the lowest, friggin "ped0 sandusky" raping young boys in the shower then coming here to comment, disgusting

The trouble with western marriages is equality then he takes to seducing and making married women commit adultry virtually if not in reality destroying their marriage. So to prove inequality is the way to do be by his actions proves his marriage means nothing. What you do with people like that, with no distinction on race or ethnic background, is to arrange for and unfortunate accident to either render them useless or terminate their time on earth. A fitting end for a parasite. The woman in this story had to have had an open marriage to begin with to date men while she is married. Or has she been a serial cheater?

is just an asshole waiting ... Forgetthis crap and die

a piece of trash!

What is it about the brits, anyways?

A good, though not great LW story until the end. Was that a clitoral circumcision apologetic? Are we going to be doing foot binding next? I generally view myself as very non-PC. But, the mutilation of women goes well beyond the realm of PC/non-PC. It's a question of simple human decency.

So she is still lying to "the one she loves most"....having an open marriage is one thing but she con'ts to lie....so what kind of marriage is that, she lies about her clit by omission, lies about her long term lover....pretty much hides it all from her "loving husband"...so while it is an interesting story and hot in spots she is just another lying cheating wife......and it didn't have to be that way, that is why the story is sad.

Stupid middle eastern religious nut bags fuck up the local pussy for their mini dicks.think they should take their Koran and slither into a cave and corn hole each other only problem is they bring their filth a the filthey part of their religion here and D W C fall for it hooka line and sinker (dumb wite/any cunt )

sure vaginal orgasm can be fine, but how good can it really be when it works best only when the clitoris is unstimulated. And----does the part-time librarian get a say so as to anything in the relationship, position? method? experiment? It doesn't seem to be the case. Dr. Assiz seems to be all knowing about women.....does he take any advice from the librarian? Could he? She seems to be totally a usee with no ideas or sexual interest except that which the man offers. Only a total chauvinist like dr. Assiz could enjoy sex with her!

Just a no godd cheating whore of a wife with a wimp husband. If I cought my wife fucking a muslim they would bothbe dead, especially if the slut was doing things with and for him that she would not do with me. David needs to growa set of balls and kick the whore out and hope that she gets pregnant aand catches a serious socialdiease from Dr aziz, then has a deformed bastard baby she has to raise

Cuckolds, swiingers, race traitors, sand niggers, it has everything exvept quality and eroticism. Why this stupid bullshit keeps showing up is beyond me. Abdul needs to stick to blowing up crowded markets and leave the erotica to those who know it. Better yet chapter two has everyone in this tale, author included, strapping on explosive vests and goin out with a bang. PATHETIC SHIT!

As you write future stories try to add some realism. If it is too hard to believe the plot, then the erotism or fantasy that would be there gets lost. Your other story, like this one, just lacks that believability component that would let your solid writing stand out. Here, female circumcision is used in backward countries to prevent females from getting satisfaction from sex, not to enhance it. Besides, it is unbelievable that a modern,woman and loving wife would want to get involved with a male pig or how she could keep her clit changes from her husband.

these fucking rag-heads are stupid imbeciles but they have always wanted to fuck white sluts, especially the brits.

Nicely written by one who obviously knows good grammar and literary technique. But Dr. 'Aziz? He is full of shit.

Don't give the x_fuckwits_x in this cat. the pleasure of tearing it up.

and a web has been woven. TK U MLJ LV NV

I don't mind but not schizophrenic characters and to many dumb cliches

This collections of "isn't that shocking" ideas is mostly just silly. You begin by warning ominously about political correctness, but all we find is cheating, dishonesty and self-serving.

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He is doing the Dr's wife? Will they ever be honest with each other? The story raises many issues not often explored here. Thank you.

Are you fucking serious you cock-sucking Muslim? Removing the clit is the equivilent of cutting off the HEAD off the penis.

You want to write about your sharia law, you goal fucking shit eater, then you and your prophet mohammed can go fuck yourselves.

Well this is ...different. No empathy for anyone in this story but the action was brisk albeit bordering flatline on emotion scale . Four stars.

sand nigger?

sandusky, bad taste but pretty funny - can we just call him Jerry?

If it wasn't supposed to be there, it wouldn't be .

Most women are hard enough to make ready for sex, and without her clit, she may never get ready.

That would surely increase the use of KY jelly.

A good hot story, but no too realistic for the western world.

That and the anal sex resulted in me giving it 2 stars instead of the 5 stars I would have given it.

"virtual circumcision"? seriously?

she thinks babies come from the infantry

Why do all you wannabe authors do the very moronic thing of posting a story on here with having the intelligence to finish your story. not only is it aggravating to read your crappy story but you haven't the fortitude to give the readers and ending. STUPID story, go back to the drawing board.

Is this like a genetic disease, wanting you wife fucked by other men? Are all British women so whorish?

This story insults a readers intelligence and his sense of good taste. Pure crap.