by Yours_Sincerely
very hot. you left me at the edge of my seat. great story and i cant wait for chapter 2.
simply wow!
(I'm hoping that you'll write the next bit quick, or at least that you'll give me a hint what happens next...)
You know who xxxx
OK - you got me hooked, when's the next chapter coming? If it's as good as the first it will be very good.
The only thing I hate worse than a cliffhanger is a great cliffhanger. Do continue!!!