All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 05'

This story continues to get better and better - I agree with all the comments and I love gentle he is with her.....very loving

well done writer, you have me on tenterhooks with this series..captivated

I am loving this. Really looking forward to the next NINE gates. I have enjoyed the excitement you've built through the first three!!

Each chapter to this story is more: beautiful, sexy, inspiring, delightful then the last- it is speaking to me on a deep level, I can not wait for more!

it has all been so wonderful! I'm wet. I NEED more!

Every thought, every emotion, and every step towards trust and fulfillment for both of them is so perfectly written. I am loving this sweet story!

Really enjoying the way this story is progressing, a beautiful scene with a caring Dom tending to a new subs needs perfectly.

Thank you, 5 stars and i eagerly await the next chapter!

So loving this story...hot yet very sweet. Reminds me of a certain Dom that I know.

Thank you and 5 more stars from me.

A hot scene with a caring Dom ...perfick