All Comments on 'Twins Score Ch. 04'

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csltcsltalmost 9 years ago
Delicious!

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next adventure.

Great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hello

Are you still writing I hope so don't keep us waiting

RastaclownRastaclownover 8 years ago
Hi

Love your story keep it going.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 5 years ago

I love the series but seeing as it's been four years since the last chapter was published, shouldn't we be seeing some time soon a chapter five?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your writing is still on par, but the subject matter is starting to veer off a bit. It kinds feels like the story has lost some of its intrigue - the twins are still rocking but it looks like they may be taking a back seat to the mom and frankly, she's just not as interesting to me as the twins are. A lot of good it does for me to comment 6 years after you wrote it, huh . . . On to the next chapter!

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