by Britease
Interesting premise. This couple was dangerously adventurous where their monogamous relationship was concerned, seemingly unaware of the Law of Unintended Consequences. They should at least know that when one plays with fire, to expect some painful blisters at the very least.
I would find someone other than Nick to explore boundaries. He seemed to have none.
This is mostly on Nina. Ken was a doofus unable to see the writing on the wall and out of touch with how many men are wired to respond to a lovely woman baring her breasts so blatantly.
You buys a ticket and takes your chances I guess. Remember to keep your arms inside the ride at all times and have fun.
Someone said it promotes a spineless wimp cuckhold. I agree. Ken should have Burnt the Bitch from her Whitney shit with Nick in the pool and saud fidget the finer eat the shit out if Nick his predator friend!!
Just another slut wife with a WACC husband. the question is would she allow hubby to have a similar fun with her BFF - a hot blond.
I think Teasedhubby said it first and best. Any sequel would be pretty much more of the same unless wife breaks her promise. Then she would move from a tease into slut territory.
All of this writers main c lose the ability to think or speak and allow themselves to be over ruled. I guess she really wants to live this sort of life and writes about it a lot. She is expert at writing cuck shit and wimps for protagonists. Crap.
No friend of mine. Nick would not be welcomes again and the wife would be on a very short leash never left alone for a very long time. She objects then its over.
What you did is create a fucking slut you dumb asshole. Run while you can and close out your bank accounts.
What a pussy. He just lost his wife and inherited a whore,she's going to push until she gets to fuck who she wants .
1*
it's either one star or five stars with this author. Guess which one this story is.
That's no wife; she's just an ordinary, dime a dozen, street-walking, gutter-slut-whore. For women, it's not a matter of "if" but only of "when".
Manipulative bitch. I was first going to suggest putting his foot down regarding her behavior. Then I realized it was to late. Kick her to the curb and get on with life. Not an innocent story from her , she just cucked him .
we can have when both are willing to just go with the flow.
Love the storyline, well writen leaving us wanting MORE please?
I love dressing outrageously myself, usually end up getting well fucked...good job we're swingers!
You are an excellent writer. This was such a fun story. It is the first of yours I have read and I plan to read several more.
After reading excellent stories like "Honey, we need to talk" you apparently have lost your mind and decided it's okay for a husband to be a voyeuristic, spineless cuckold.
What I think is that this was a poor story. Not badly written. Just a story about a wimp. Not interesting.
Oh, my! Very, very, very sexy. Can't wait to read more of your work.
Well Ken, if you were going to, you should have exploded with rage by now, but you haven't so now you need to go with the flow and enjoy whatever happens. Give your friend full access to whatever your wife will allow. Lets hear what happened soon.
Like they said, don't leave us swinging. I'm waiting for the next installment.
you know what will happen and you have no right to be mad about it when it does
With Nina promising to keep her jeans on and zipper up, and promising the same for Nick's jeans and zipper, I think you have kind of boxed yourself in a corner as far as the next installment goes (if there is a next installment). I like stories where the wife teases her husband with her sexual playfulness, but I don't like the idea that the wife would have to break her promise in order for the playfulness to go further. And since Nick has already groped Nina's breasts, I don't think he (or the reader) will be satisfied with only more of the same.