All Comments on 'Two Collars Pt. 02'

Very well written sex scenes, but the total luck of dialoges between the characters makes the story little "plane". It's like watching an old dumb movie without underheadings.Hope you will fix this in the next chapters.

Thanks for your honest feedback. The truth is I find writing dialogue quite awkward, that's why I resort to scenes like this where there has been a lot of pre-planning and discussion (and I try and make it obvious) between the characters. It is something I want to alleviate though.

Love it. The way you write about consent and negotiation is really hot, and different. Love this series.

Excellent scene. Very hot. MFM yet focused toward hetro. immediately added to watch list. I will watch for more.