by PulpWyatt
Pretty hot. I like it. I like the set up. I like the action. I do have to say, I'd prefer it if Levi got both Nolan and Rory and teased them together. Honestly, the only part of this story that turns me off is the fact that it tears two lovers apart. Same story where Levi keeps both the poor guys as pets/playthings and it's perfect, IMO.
I love the plot and characters. You are so good at describing the scene. I felt as though I was there. Personally, I like a little more descriptive sex scenes, but we each have our own style, and you write yours well. I am intrigued by the plot and look forward to reading the next installment. Well done.