All Comments on 'Two in a Room'

Congratulations!

Its an wonderful writing...Hot, real erotic with amazing story lines.

Thanx, it was real wonderful experience reading it. Worth spending time...

Go on!!!!

Did the kids know what they were doing? Why don't you write a story about how the kids walked in on them having an orgy. And the swinging group have to explain that it's not love it's just sex or at least that is what they think. Oh well stupid people do stupid things and stupid writers write stupid stories. But if you are into this lifestyle goodbye and goodluck.

Very well-written. Clear, concise language, excellent grammar, believable thoughts and emotions, and a wonderful story.

Very hot. One of the best.

Fabulous story, very well written.

I came four times, once for each page!

Fabulous story, very well written.

I came four times, once for each page!

Started off well but got more ridiculous and unbelievable as it went on.

And 'waste' instead of 'waist' had me laughing out loud.

Soooo hot loved it came twice reading it........i,m a mess i even tasted a little......ok more than a little