All Comments on 'Two Norwegian Sisters and Cousin'

by leBonhomme

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OseekerOseeker6 months ago

Got too confusing to enjoy this read....

2 stars

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

While this story has some interest ...the repetition of some words is, at best, annoying ... 'snorted' - 'murmured' 'smirked' are all unnecessary and could be removed without any damage to the overall gist of your submission

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