Unbroken Ch. 16

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A strong wind suddenly blew throughout the entire living room. It was really violent and it roared like a huge destructive wind. All of a sudden, Aidan appeared in front of the living room looking really mad.

"Oh fuck..." Ethan gasped when he saw Aidan. "God..." he had almost run away but he kept calm.

Granny, Justin and Ethan got really scared and moved further away. They had been scared as they had no idea what had just happened. Aidan had never appeared like that before and not with the violent wind. He hadn't appeared and disappeared since that time he had taken them from the palace so it was kinda scary.

"Aidan..." Granny spoke softly, holding the baby tightly. "Are you alright?"

Aidan moved his eyes to his granny and saw the baby. The wind died down. Everything was calm now. He was now calm after seeing the baby but it didn't change a thing to him. Everything that he was feeling was really eating him up. The power he felt inside of him was more than he could ever imagine.

"Take care of my baby, granny." Aidan said harshly. "Take good care of him..."

"Aidan," Granny started getting closer to him, staring at him with a confused face. She was scared. "What are you telling me? Where are you..."

"I am glad you have decided to go back." The priest suddenly appeared. Granny and the others gasped and took a few steps back. They had no idea what was going on. "This is what you were born for."

"Aidan..."

"Yes! Ethan..." Aidan breathed in deeply. "He is the priest. He is the new priest."

"But how could he..."

"We don't have time for that." The priest gestured. "I will personally answer your questions later but right now, Aidan has something important to do."

"What?" Granny gasped. "What..."

"I am going back to Angria." Aidan said as he clenched his fists. "I have certain matters to deal with."

"What?" Granny gasped. "Are you going to..."

"Yes!" Aidan said. "I am going there to finally put an end to all this. My real parents were brutally killed. I will make sure that he pays for everything and..."

"Anger can destroy many things." The priest said, sniffing the air. "Always remember this Aidan. You are more powerful than him. You have something that he will never have. There is a lot that you haven't discovered you can do but you can do wonders. Remember..." The priest raised his trident and pointed at Aidan's head. "You can do anything you set your mind on. With this mission, you will discover that you have a lot inside of you. You are ready, my son. Go and fulfill your destiny."

Aidan looked at his family. All of them seemed really worried. The worry on their faces couldn't be masked by anything. They seemed to be really scared too and he could see that granny was slightly shaking. Aidan moved his eyes and stared at his baby. He went near and kissed his sweet cheeks.

He got up and then looked at granny with no expression on his face. He was mad. "Please. Take good care of my son while I am away. Once all this is done I shall return to you. And don't worry about me."

Aidan turned around quickly, clenching his fists even harder.

"What are you going to do?"

Aidan breathed harshly, feeling a really powerful energy take control of him. "I am going to fulfill my destiny. I will do this for my parents... I am going to do this for all the people that he has killed. I am going to do it for the people of... Angria even though they hated me... this will be for all those he has slaughtered."

Aidan only had one thing in mind, destroying the evil seeker and all that followed him. He was now not even scared of anything. His only goal was to fulfill his destiny. He believed in his powers and the prophecy the priest had told him. He was gonna do it for his parents whom he hadn't met thanks to that evil king. Nothing was gonna stand in his way. He was gonna win it for real no matter what. He was gonna destroy the dark and evil seeker.

Clenching his teeth as a terrible wind blew, Aidan clenched on his fists harder. A frown appeared on his face as he glowered, feeling his body trembling.

"Nothing is gonna stand in my way to my destiny." He vowed. "Get ready to pay for everything. I am coming..."

The battle has just begun.

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Thank you so much guys for reading another chapter of Unbroken. I really appreciate it a lot and I hope you found it interesting. Don't forget to drop your comments about this chapter and don't forget to rate. Chapter 17 is on its way.

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josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

not really mathew...I also..Oh van thanks

rmathewsrmathewsover 6 years ago
#17

Am I the only one that has refreshed Vanalas story page 10-times tonight, expecting #17 to popup?

rmathewsrmathewsover 6 years ago
Plot

The plot of this story is fantastic. It has all the ingredients to keep you hooked waiting for the next chapter. My guess is that chapter 17 will be a complex chapter requiring more effort than most, written so far.

vanalasvanalasover 6 years agoAuthor
Apologies

So sorry guys for the late post but I had some problems that I had to attend to. but now I am back and I have post two chapters which will b approved soon. sorry guys and I love you

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Silence is golden! Please tell me you will be posting soon....

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

another day of not posting

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Dont dare even tell me that U.B is gona end..dont tell me please.i want it to continue

but van,plz post

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Can't wait anymore

You are the only reason why I come in this site!

Chancem77Chancem77over 6 years ago
Really getting excited

I'm eager to see what Luis's reaction is when he finds out about the baby and if Aidan will take him back or not. I really hope they do get back together. Great story so far, can't wait for more.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

trust me anon,u wouldnt get the anger if u didnt read how wyatt treated the kingdom,,so it had to read it and get that revenge spirit..In otherwards to me all pages essential

thanks my fellow vanaholics for moral boosting our writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
just the last 2pages

The 2 last pages made sense into relation awaiting for the battle will be happy to read Wyatt's ass frozen to hell

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Still not properly proof read......you really do need an editor.

I know you write quickly and with great emotion but this can be spoilt for the reader when you get the names of your characters wrong! This was particularly annoying when you kept referring to Prince Luis as William! I still got caught up in the narrative and so am scoring you with a 5!

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Oh Ethan and Justin are athing????i knew it,i knew they had to do it,they may even have fucked.Hahaha,yeah why are they blushing???Haha love is strange,soldier Ethan is in Love,uhmmmmm???Haha

should i give it atheme song???Hmmmmmmmmmmm,got it

trouble-taylor swift

But van,i dont hav much to say,but bring back our sweet happy love..Aidan has to kill wyatt and his rubbish

Aid..Has to produce other kids for luis and we request u to show us how luis takes care of him..i love u so much,thanks for entertaining us..thanks for ur good and excellent work.I love u sooo many..Plz 2moro post please vanalas/king him........??

I HATE WILLIAM AND THAT YUCKY FATHER

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

How they treated my sweet loyal family...No van enough is enough..let wyatt get what he deserves

and plz bring back our sweet Aidan,..I was mad to the highest when he was refusing to go and save luis..I wanted to slap him..God damn it

luis has to see his son..Ahmmmmmm how do u see when he use his magic and take royals to his castle and then fight with that moron freely uh????

Thanks to the priest,he boosted energy in our angel..so ITS ON..,DIE IN HELL THOSE CULPRITS..I HATE THEM..I DONT KNOW HOW MUCH.BUT I HATE THEM SO MANY NOT EVEN MUCH..GOD

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