All Comments on 'Uncle Charles' Proposal'

Dialogue sounded realistic, but the premise sure didn't . Still, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

I expect your version will be much more explicit than the Bard's creation. At least I hope so.

Another story starts from wifethief and already shaping up to be a cracker.

Agree with the previous comment though.

A few more typos than normal creeping in .

Shaping up to be good.

Great start! Keep these chapters coming!

You have set the scene for what will follow, but I hope that the installments are longer and have MUCH more character development than the simple vignette so far. This can be just ordinary or it can be much better than that. Don't disappoint us.

Its one thing to make her a slave for a year to teach her discipline but her own uncle just sold her as a sex slave, that's just disgusting

I always look forward to a new story from you and this one looks like it could be a cracker!! There were a few typos which surprised me, but they didn't detract me from enjoying the story.

Look forward to learning more about the characters and just what's in store for the spoilt little rich girl.

5 stars and a plea for the next instalment ASAP please

Great start, looking forward to reading more

This promises to be a great story! I like the premise. Please continue. I'm looking forward to more, and I know your readers will enjoy it.

I opened this expecting the uncle to be a complete skeeze, but no, just at the end of his rope with the princess. I expected her to be a slave to him...ewww, wrong category...but no again.

Now that mr large and enigmatic has little miss spendthrift, will you continue to surprise us? I agree that this is classic Taming of the Shrew. Will you give us some new twists? I hope so, but no pressure. ;)

I really like it so far , but I really hate stories that are put out in short installments.

what follows is

disturbing

disgusting

degrading

and

demeaning

to anyone who follows this path

please finish i can't wait to read about her year