All Comments on 'Under His Thumb Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
So Hot!

Your stories are hot. You are on my favorite author list. Please add updates more frequently.

pagan girlpagan girlabout 18 years ago
Very gritty

Just what a slave story should be...

Catholic GirlCatholic Girlabout 18 years ago
REally hot

Loved this chapter. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
MORE!!!

Let's have another chapter soon PLEASE!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
MORE PLEASE

This is getting so fucking hot. I look forward to more of her degradation from free woman to slave

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 12 years ago
Great idea but could improve

Not bad but I wish there was much, much more detail. like the chastity belt is only mentioned in passing a couple times and we have no clue how much time passed. I love the piercing but again no detail of how or why. Or even what they will be used for. Will they use several small locks to lock her sex closed with something inside? Hang weights to keep her sex always open and excited from the movement? And detail how the these things affect her, maybe how it feels. But the big thing is more details please so keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
great start of story

A great start to a story would love to read more on how she is with her owner and other business people and maybe how she gets used around the company and all the othe workers!

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