All Comments on 'Under the Willow Tree'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Love in the Rain!

Amish females Gina and Myra make love on a rainy day. Unknown to them, a novelist is secretly watching. Research for his book - or is he just curious? Something magic and enchanting about this story. Good Read. Excellent Write!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Pennsylvania Dutch spoken by the Amish

Your story was exciting, well written, and exciting to read. I believe the Amish speak what is known as "Pennsylvania Dutch", an Anglicized dialect of their German heritage and language, rather than Netherlander/Holland Dutch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Made a believer out of me

I'm usually not a big fan of lesbian stories but this one was so exquisitely written I was instantly hooked. Absolutely beautiful build up and yummy sex scene. Wonderful job! I look forward to reading more from you!!

ungenderlessungenderlessover 17 years ago
Wet!

I liked this story...the author really knows how to capture the chaos of a storm and turn it into an energetic sexual atmosphere.

Don GrampaDon Grampaover 17 years ago
EXCELLENT

Excellent story and very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
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i look forward to more of this Amish story

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