All Comments on 'Undercovers Detective Ch. 07'

Great flow, the scenes transition flawlessly from one to the other. The interaction between Frank, Alex, Janine, and the girls at the Slice is extremely well done. You foretold the fact that Alex could sing and that adds a lot to her attraction to her clients and bosses. This should speed up the action and investigation. Sex between Alex and Frank is extremely well written. The two twists at the end add to the relavence of the story and coming conclusion.

If they get married at her home, because of her parents' social standing, it will be written up in the newspapers. Too easy for crime folks to pick up on that and involve her family in kidnapping, etc.

Also, when Frank handed the shotgun to Mike, he handed him his fingerprints on a weapon. If Mike is cagy, he saved that to frame Frank in the future.