All Comments on 'Unexpected Alone Time'

I have always wanted to do this to my step daughter when she was younger

Your story is very well written. Can't wait for part two

Please run your story through a spell checker. It really makes the story flow so much more easily.

Good story, need a sequel though.

I like it. Great build up towards the climax and a nice finisher. I hope you write the sequel (just make it so that she doesn't find out please...too many stories where the girl finds out and says she loves it).

Thanks.

Write more ok!

Also, he is a dead duck unless he cleans her up. A woman know when she's been fucked......

Nice stroke story though.