All Comments on 'Unexpected Debt'

And if shes had children, tightness isnt a factor...cunts are stretchy.

Her other stories were utter shit too. Snore zzzzz

Even an editor can't save this

Some people are mean and they hide behind their computer and post their mean comments. They would never say this to your face. Hiding behind a computer gives them courage like the wizard of Oz.

If that's true, I would expect that you'd know that the half-way point between a woman's period places her at her most fertile time, not just prior to her period as your story contends. Please continue to write, but find an editor or learn how apostrophes, commas and question marks are suppose to be used.

Keep going. It shows more promise than your other series.

Great job!

SHE NEEDS TO PAY OTHER BILLS. TIM CAN FIND HER OHERS to HELP HER.

It's been a while since this story appeared. Please add a second chapter.

Really want the birth control to not work and her to submit to giving him a blowjob

Unfinished after a year and a half.

If you finish, I will rate.

This is your best story in my opinion

it seems like there is more potential for this story?

Tim was at his house. He has video cameras and recorders?

Good possibilities of blackmail, coercion, unwilling themes from here?

He wants her back. Threaten to release tapes?

I have no doubt a woman wrote this. Too much superfluous information

not interesting to men.

I would recommend writing from a third party perspective. Not from your own?

You could describe the heroine's and tormentor's feelings?

It's more interesting to see a man or imparial observer's view of how the woman looks, rather than your own

This is your best, kinda sucks it never got a part 2

So much for "To be continued..."

What happens next, hopefully she gets impregnated by Tim anyway