- NonHuman
- Unexpected Happenings
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All Comments on 'Unexpected Happenings'
by Mightybond123
- 10 Comments
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI Loved your story and i am not into the bonage nor the non human but this one was awesome! i am so hot right now!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI really enjoyed your story. I like non-human and well tentacle sex is a turn on for me. I was great.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoThere aren't many stories in this topic on Literotica, so thanks for adding to the canon. The story itself is good, but I had to lower your rating due to homonym confusion and some physical impossibilities. (You insert things into a pussy or vagina, the only things that get inserted into a clit are genital piercings). If you are already editing your work but are just bad at spelling, try to get a friend to pre-read your work. Literotica also has volunteer editors to help you get your writing legs.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoBest Tentacle story... ever. That is all I have to say, please write another!
Anonymousover 12 years agoI love this story. Your a great writer. I hope you add more to this story. Its great!
Anonymousalmost 9 years ago"She managed to insert one into her clit."??? Before you write your next story - which wasn't bad, by the way - please familiarize yourself with female anatomy.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoOne of the lower quality stories I have read of this theme.
Do not get me wrong, the theme is fine - but I find the way it was written/executed pretty rushed. Spelling, descriptions, pacing, and various details are all rather lackluster.
Mightybond123almost 7 years agoAuthorHowdy, "MightyBond123" here, now know as Kriiden or MasterKriiden. It's been a awhile since I wrote this story, and I am aware of how atrocious the lack of editing is. (Also, "inserting into clit." Yes. I've grown up a bit.) However, I'd like to thank the people who looked through the atrocious English that I attempted to use when I wrote this story such long time ago, to see the story for what they thought it was. I would also like to thank the people who went both ways, pointed out it's faults, while enjoying the story for what it was. Thank you. I post here now so I can show this story off to others, as a possible example of my early work.
